Final page. Yes this all, short preview version for contest. (for the competition is only 10 pages limit)
Stupid story, I know. But later I will try work more and deeper in storyline and graphics. It was the first attempt at writing.
Last three pages done in final deadline day, of challenge very very fast, but quality of elaboration decreased.NINTH page here
more stuff from this project C path
Very big thanks for translation, Lawrence!