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It looks quite excellent, but I can't stress how much it bothers me that the character and bick just kinda become part of the background. If they were just a slightly warmer color, not much, but some, they would pop from the background, and this would be a stunning comic page. Right now it's just a very pretty comic page, and an excellent bit of art.
Just make the character pop in the second and 3rd panels, and you got it.